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It does not have to be complex, but sometimes showing 3 scenarios side by side can mean all the difference before you start a campaign or initiative towards one of those goals.
water...not dunk his head and baptize him.
High level is a *start*
I would add a model that ties together the milestones to how they are reached. In other words $X gets us Y customers at Z cost, here is the growth on a monthly basis and it ties back to the marketing spend of course which is included with all expenses and flows into the hitting of the milestones.
I have made way too many business models in my time, to not see it all fit neatly together can be frustrating. Also having a couple variations on projections is not a bad idea (however some disagree), so at least have variables.
This way at a future board meeting the entrepreneur (now funded) can point to the model and explain why spend increased/decreased or revenue increased/decreased based on the variables, such as "we expected 2,000 free registrations in Jan at X conversion rate to get Y paid subscriptions, and we got 2,000 but got Z conversion rate yielding T conversions. "We are testing to increase the the conversion rate even more as well as the free registrations".
Knowing the levers and what variables impact the bottom line is critical. Models can be changed and they will, however let everyone know why and how, otherwise board meetings will get out of control and members will assume the entrepreneur is clueless if they walk into every meeting without a forecast vs. actual and explanations. Also knowing the key triggers of the business keeps the focus clear and everyone on track, particularly if you can keep 3 simple goals in front of everyone and assure their efforts impact at least one. Otherwise startups can easily go off track only to begin preparation for a board meeting and realize they spun their wheels for a month and did not make any true progress.
Personally I think you do need detail linking everything together, if for no other reason then to show you have thought it through. Does a potential investor want to see it, probably not, but they will want the highlights and unless the entrepreneur has a track record with the potential investor it does not hurt to show you have thought it out and can back up the assumptions with logical thought. Many times those calculations are passed down to an associate who goes through it. My two cents.
even if it hasn't been built out yet... and even better is a set of
results from an experiment, even if it's a small one, that proves your
theory.
What I'd love to see from businesses are some well expressed milestones around product evolution. Something like "30% of customers in target market say the current product evolution meets 100% of their needs".
I know its cool these days to invest in start-ups that don't have a defined business model, but that's only going to work for a few. The vast majority should be thinking about sales from day one. This then ties directly into #4. Knowing your sales strategy will help you in knowing when you need your next round of funding (and also how big this round should be)
Of course, the VCs reviewing the business plan will be paid for their review. I suppose paying a VC $500 for an hour or two of their time to review and comment on a document isn't such a bad idea is it? Is $500 too little, too much or just right? (Starting to sound like Goldilocks and the 3 VCs).
Does this sound like a good approach? Would any of you VCs ever consider reviewing a business plan if someone approached you on it?
One other question. How many pages do you find acceptable in a business plan? I don't want to know the maximum number of pages but what you find acceptable. Realistically, 1 page is not going to cut it. Does 5 pages sound realistic?
Personally, I don't think it matters what branch a VC works in who reviews any business plan. The same concepts and good business practices apply to all branches. Maybe there is such a web site that offers such a service. I haven't looked into it. If it doesn't exist, well there you go, another great business opportunity. Start a web service that allows entrepreneurs to have their business plans reviewed by professional VCs! Ok, I'm getting off track. But if you really like that idea, let me know ;-)
Incidentally, for those of you VCs who might be curious as to what I am developing, all I can say is that it is a web service that is on par with eBay and Amazon (actually far surpasses them) but addresses the needs for mobile application developers and customers who purchase their apps. The web application will make Apple's iTunes look like a kindergarten once it is released. It's global in every aspect and I believe will be one of the hottest web apps to hit the net once released. If that is something you find interesting, just follow me on Twitter (johannblake) for snippets of info that I will release from time to time.
Thanks for any insights.
when i meet you in NY last week i got to know in person some of the abode wisdom.
how do you see the "Team" value? and its ability to raise something in a bootstrap way?